Randy's Girl

Wow I think it is really cool how well you vividly paint a picture with your words. It really speaks to the reader. In the end of the eight verse ...

I really like what you have to say. I think you should add more inbetween chorus it sounds like it is repeating itself just a little too much. "Did I ...

I really like how you mixed up all the letters even if it does make it harder to read. It helps the people reading understand what those people go through ...